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PostSubject: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 7:11 am

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What happens when everything you ever loved is taken away from you! I don't know how but i will find you Selena! Things are not as they seem when Evan, Zed, Kaylynn, Chief, and Jessie team up to take down the ultimate EVIL Wizard.

chapter 1

it all began when one day selena seemed nervous, i asked her if she was ok. she said she was ok and life went on. later she was very jumpy, i came up behind her and was going to hug her she jumped. she told me she was just tired. we went to sleep that night, and all seemed fine. the next day i awoke to see selena was missing from bed, i went down to the kitchen to see if she was making breakfast, she was not there. i searched the house and nothing. i went to the garage to see if she took K.A.R.R. to the store. K.A.R.R. was still there, so i check his surveilence video. he hadn't moved all day. i called jessie, to see if Selena came to her house, when she told me No i almost freaked out. i called everyone i knew, and nothing!!! something must be very very wrong! just then the Wizard Phone rang, selena's in real danger!

chapter 2

"The Dark Wizard Makuta always leaves a calling card", said Zed to Evan. "what is it?" i asked. "a black heart". zed replied. "i have not seen one like that in the house". said evan. "well". said Zed, let me get Kaylynn, jessie, and chief to come and help us look. Everyone Arrived at the house to begin looking the heart. being retired from BABV SS Chief didn't have the super computer anymore so we had to do things the hard way.... by looking in old books. "this could take ages"!!! i said. "Never lose hope"! said Kaylynn "We will find Selena"! "i guess you are right", i said. Zed come look at this. a black heart right on the bed!! "how"! i demanded to know! "you see he has dark powers thus her can take people from wherever they are without anyone knowing!" said zed. "so you mean she might not even be on earth"?? I said. "my guess would be she has gone to the Dark Realm"! said Zed.

Chapter 3

Let's Suit up team! Jessie not having anymore agent things relied on Martial Arts, Chief had hid some old agent's phasers in his house, Zed being our Wizard was always ready with Wizards fire, Kaylynn ou Confessor had the ability to confess people to do what she wanted, and two daggers, and Finally Evan Our Hero mastered the keyblade, and the DNA watch, was ready to take back his wife. It's time i shouted "we must be on the look out he will send things to hunt us down"!!! i said, i then asked zed, "what does Makuta want with selena"? he replied, to turn her into a Dark Wizard. i gulped. things just got more dire. we hopped into K.I.T.T. and drove away.

chapter 4

"where to first"? asked jessie. "i honestly have no clue"! said evan. "Zed where should we start"? asked chief. "let's see... the dark wizard had to get to this world right? well in order for him to do that he has to have some point of entry like an arch". "you mean like the Arch of St Louis"!! said evan. "Exactly"! said Zed. "wait! do you guys know what else is in St Louis? BABW HQ maybe maxine can lend us some "Furry Warriors'". they drove for hours and hours and finally arrived in St Louis. at Bear HQ maxine said "i have heard about your predicament and i agree to lend you some Warrior Bears". "in order to bring them to life you have to say BearHug 3 times. plus they ship easier when not stuffed". "thanks maxine"! said the gang.

chapter 5

we finally arrived at the arch. "HUGE isn't it"! zed said. "yes very"! said jessie. "wait we don't know what's on the other side". said kaylynn. we could be facing a rough road ahead. "well if it's rough we'll just have to be ready for anything"! said evan. "a more important question" said Zed, "how do we get it open"? just then the keyblade appeared in evan's hand. "i think this is the key"! i said. pointing it at the arch a beam of light shot fomr the end and opened a portal in the arch. stepping through they saw a dark world. and a HUGE castle with dragons circling it. jessie said, "with a shock, LOOK up there"! "it's selena on the top of the castle in what appears to be a prison cell". "do you realize how many floors there are"! said zed. "about 20 floors to be exact"! said Chief. "alright then we best get through to the castle".

chapter 6-floor 1

finally to the front door, evan and his friends will face 20 floors of madness! Walkign through the door, it looked like a normal room. well if that normal room is in a dark, and scary castle. everything seemed to go as planned until they reached the eleavator. the pressed the up button, and out of the eleavator came a medium sized dragon. everyone leaped back, and evan got rid of it with his keyblade. "that was scary"! said jessie. "well what did you expect"! said evan. chief figured out that there were elevators for each floor, but you had to beat the challenge at each floor to get it open. "we need to go! to the elevator"!!!!! said evan.

chapter 7-floor 2

floor 2 didn't seem to much different from the last one. walking across the big room we were stopped by a GIANT dance floor. chief said sarcasticly "well wizards to move "Magically" across the dance floor". jessie slapped chief in the back of the head. "not the time"! she said. to get across the floor we have to dance across. jessie went across first. then zed, followed by kaylynn, chief, and zed. when evan went to dance across the floor, it opened op and attempted to swallow him. he dodged it in the nick of time, and didn't fall through. "let's rest awhile". said chief, look chairs over there! as they walked toword the chairs dropped a water bottle in the chair and the chair exploded! "NOT a good idea chief". sadi evan.

chapter 8-floor 3

as we arrived at the third floor it looked just like my house! all of the sudden a darkness came over the group, and we blacked out. waking from our slumber we were laid in a pile on the floor surrounded, by Anti Us??? "who are you"? i asked. "i am Evan, and these are my friends well you know them, because well thier your friends"! hahahahaha!!!! "well i don't like your tone! guys now"!!!! we srung up to fight the anti us. i took out my keyblade, and my other copied exactly as i did. we were to evenly matched, jessie, kaylynn, chief, and zed realized the same thing. to beat them we have to fight each other. evan took on anti jessie, jessie took on anti evan, anti chief took on anti kaylynn, and kaylynn took on anti zed, while the real zed tried to help where he could. we took them all down, and attempted to leave when anti evan hit evan in the back sending the keyblade into the air. jessie turned to see it fly, she turned and jumped high in the air, and grabbed the keyblade. she prepared to throw it at her enemy she realized evan can shoot light lazers from it so she could to. she pointed it, and with a blast of light shot anti Evan across the room. "thanks jessie"! i said after the ordeal was finished. "yay good thing i remebered you can shoot light from it". "acctually jessie only a keyblade master can do that so thus there are now two". "Me and You". "so then where's my keyblade"? jessie asked. "well try summonning one". jessie focused and pulled from the air a keyblade.

chapter 9 floor 4

"what shall we do now"? asked evan. "well we continue our quest to the top of the castle". zed replied. "this is taking FOREVER!?!" said Chief. "yes we are all fully aware of that mister Sidicus". said Zed. "SIDICUS"!? blurted out jessie as she started to laugh. "it's not my real name." said chief. as they continued on to the next floor. zed figured out he could tak us up 14 floors with his magic, but he must wait untill we reached floor 5. floor five was just a giant garden with GIANT ANTS!?! one tried to get jessie , but zed shot wizards fire at it, and burnt it to ash. armies of evil teddie bears started marching tword us. this was not going to be easy. Chief said sarcasticly, "We'll have to knock the stuffing out of them"! jessie then walked up behind chief, and slapped him in the back of the head. "Not The Time!!!" she said. leaping into action the team executed every movement perfectly, zed convered evan, and jessie with balls of fire, while evan, and jessie foguth side-by-side to take them down. chief had brought a bid laser gun. he fired a laser blast and destroyed all of the evil teddy bears. "lets' get moving to the next floor."

chapter 10 -floor 19

"we're almost there"! said evan. as they neared the next elevator the Anti others came in through a portal. "Sooooo you think your Zed is the only one who can open a portal"?? "well guess again"!!!! "this ends here"! said jessie. she hurled her keyblade at anti evan. knocking him down. "it's going to take alot more than that". he shot a bolt of dark lightning at the gang knocking them over. "Hmm".. said zed. "maybe you can power together to them down". "jessie, zeds right"! "we can use master forum". "Huh" replied jessie. "just watch"!! evan leaped into the air, and jessie dissapeared. Now powering evan with 2 keyblades evan and jessie had to combine to stop these bad guys. evan now had: Super Speed, Super strength, and super jump. evan with 5 swings of his swords took down the anti team. evan turned back to normal. "WOW"!!! said jessie. "we did awsome"! she continued. "i know, but lets get to the last floor"! "Selena is waiting".

Chapter 11 Final Floor.

upon arriving in the room it had a HUGE cage with selena in it. i jumped up to the cage, and saw her sleeping in the bottom. just then a thunderous laugh shook me down. falling to the ground i saw makuta. i drew my sword. "THIS ENDS HERE"! i yelled. just as i leaped to take a swing at him, he shot a bolt of lightning at me, and i sailed out the window, with a loud crash i was gone. "NOOOOOO"! screamed jessie. "this can't be, Evan can't be dead"! she cried. "It shall end for you pathetic weaklings now"! said makuta.

chapter 12

Jessie now the teams leader took command, she got everyone to attack at once. "we need more help"! she said. chief looked at his phone. "let me call arcee". he rang up arcee. "arcee can you come help us"? "sure"! she said. "where are you goys"? "umm in the dark realm, in a creepy castle". "i know that castle, me and rob had dinner there once." "i'll be over in a jiff". just then jessie got zed to use a wizards fire trick and they knocked makuta down. he got back up, and started at jessie with his dark wand. just then breaking through the glass was arcee, and the wolfpack. "Hey Goys"!!!!! "hope i am not late to the party"! the wolf pack attacked makuta, and arcee used her vampire powers to help take hime down. he appeared to be dead, and they went to find evan. he flew down 20 stories to the bottom. "chances are he is dead". said chief. jessie started to cry. "he was my BFF, i don't just say that about anyone". they rescued selena and made thier way down. at the bottom laid evan. lifeless. Selena went over to him. she knelt down. took his hand, and said, "thank you for comming to save me... now it's my turn to save you". she knelt beside him, and kissed him. i sprung to life. "WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWW!!!! what a woman"!

chapter 13

just then a dark portal opened in the sky, and out of it came a bolt of lightning, and sucked the team up into a battle ground. "Where are we?" asked arcee. "my guess is we are on the final battle field". said zed. evil makuta appeared. "this is a tournement of wizards ONLY"!!! shooting the team into an invisible bubble. Selena became robed in white wizards Garments. i shall finish this guys. Leaping into the air she sad, "Havity no Gravity"!! just then everything began to float. in return makuta shot a rock at selena, she blasted it to gravel. i have more power than you will EVER have, said makuta.
"i am not so sure of that said evan, as he flew into the battle field to help selena. as she shot a rig of fire around evan, evan leaped at makuta, and dealt a blow. just then he summoned a bolt of lightning shooting selena across the arena. this was the final straw for evan, he jumped up into the air, and used every bit of maigc he had left, and destroyed Makuta. dropping to the ground, the keyblade dissapeared into thin air. "you gave up the keyblade for me"? said selena. "i did." said evan. jessie ran over to evan, "here take mine! the keyblade means more to you than me!" evan took jessie's keyblade, and opened a portal for all to go home.

Epilouge

things became quiet after the Keyblade dissapeared. on morning i was out getting the mail, and WAM i was knocked down. when i came to, the Kingdom Key was waiting in my lawn. i went, and picked it up, was a new adventure starting? or was something bad brewing. something in my heart told me a new adventure was starting.

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 7:11 am

Great so far!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 7:27 am

Cool!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 7:51 am

wow! can't wait to read more Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 8:43 am

Cool start! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 9:26 am

I can't wait to read the next part!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 11:07 am

How exciting!
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 2:53 pm

gosh!!! Evan your writing skills amaze me!

Keep going,this is gonna sell 1000000000 copies! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 8:51 pm

LOL COOL.
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 10:25 pm

glad you like this

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 6th 2010, 10:30 pm

good work friend i was going to ask when we we're to look for Selena
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 7th 2010, 1:43 am

oooooooh!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 7th 2010, 4:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 7th 2010, 8:27 am

awesomer!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 7th 2010, 8:28 am

Cool! I wonder what will happen? Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 7th 2010, 9:57 am

Chapter 1 is great! I hope you find Selena Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 1:32 am

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 1:38 am

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 2:08 am

Awesome!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 4:43 am

Its better now!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 4:57 am

thanks everyone!!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 5:22 am

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 6:05 am

thanks guys!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 6:08 am

cool! waaaah! Sad i retired
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PostSubject: Re: Evan and the Gang in: Saving Selena   February 8th 2010, 11:58 pm

it's OK chief, you can come wokr at my agency!

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