Evan 11 Animal Force

Prologue
Evan was a normal kid, but that would all change when he and his friends Julia Jessie and Sid went camping with his grandma.

Chapter 1
“I’m not a fan of camping.” said Julia as she closed her locker at school. “Well my Grandma wants to take us, so we’re going.” said Evan as he closed his locker. “Hey guys!” said Jessie as she ran up. “Where’s Sid?” asked Jessie. “I saw him earlier, but I think he went to go get his final report Card.” replied Evan. “That Sid always checking his grades.” said Julia. “Well at least we’ll all be together this summer.” said Evan as held Julia’s hand. “True that is!” said Julia smiling. Walking around the corner Nana was already waiting in the RV. “I thought we were meeting you back at home?” asked Evan. “Well I already talked to your parents and we set off from here.” said Nana Opening the door. “Wait for MEEEE!!!” shouted Sid as he ran down the walk. Skidding to halt in front of them Sid pulled out his report card. “I got all A’s!” he shouted. “Yep I soo knew that was happening.” snickered Jessie. “Well all aboard!” said Nana. “What about our luggage?” asked Julia. “It’s already loaded in the back!” Whispering to Evan, Julia said, “It’s like she’s a wizard.” Evan laughed “Yeah sometimes it seems that way.” They began driving passed street sign after street sign; they arrived at the camp ground, and Nana parked it, and turned the awning out. “Evan, I’m really having fun! You were right!” said Julia. “We haven’t even been here that long.” said Evan. Julia, Jessie, and Sid began helping Nana make dinner. Evan went off for a walk in the woods. He walked passed a tree, and picked up a rock. He put the rock in his pocket and kept walking. He found a lake about a half a mile from the camp. Evan looked up. “Man, I hope this summer had something exciting!” He said. Just then from Behind him a Meteor came and slammed into the lake. A clear ball came skidding up to him. The ball flipped open to expose a watch. Evan bent over to pick it up. The watch open itself, and latched to his wrist. With a loud thunder crash, the watch attached to his wrist.

Mean while back at camp
“What was that?” asked Julia. “Sounds like a storm!” said Nana. “Someone should go find Evan!” said Sid. “I’ll go and get him! Come on Sid!” said Jessie as she began running into the woods.

He pulled and pulled, but it wouldn’t come lose. “Uh oh!” said Evan as the watch came up, and he pushed it down. It turned him into a wolf. He couldn’t figure out what to do, so he ran back to camp, to get help. Running up to camp, people started freaking out. “Wolf! Everybody run!” shouted a woman. Jessie and Chief stopped in their tracks. “Evan could be in trouble!” said Jessie, and Chief in Unison.

good start!

Glad you like it Beth!

luv it

Julia shouldn't be complaining,when I went camping with the 6th grade we were staying in smelly cabins,it was raining all the time we were there, and ate kosher food shes ruffing it compared to us.
and also,this so8unds like Ben 10

anyways,good start!

Catie wrote:

Julia shouldn't be complaining,when I went camping with the 6th grade we were staying in smelly cabins,it was raining all the time we were there, and ate kosher food shes ruffing it compared to us.
and also,this so8unds like Ben 10

anyways,good start!

There's nothing wrong with kosher food.


Good work, Evan

Love it,,,Continue Please-puppy dog face-

Remi11 wrote:

Catie wrote:

Julia shouldn't be complaining,when I went camping with the 6th grade we were staying in smelly cabins,it was raining all the time we were there, and ate kosher food shes ruffing it compared to us.
and also,this so8unds like Ben 10

anyways,good start!

There's nothing wrong with kosher food.


Good work, Evan

neither me or the kids in my grade have eaten Kosher food before,besides one girl who is Jewish.
And a guy ate a hotdog and there was a stick in it.

Glad you all like it. and yes it's like Ben 10

I've ate it before..

NP, Evan